These two punctuation marks are giving people a run for their money. So, because I have observed semi-colon and colon abuse, this week's blog will be an analysis of how we use these in our writing.
1. Your first assignment is to go to the Grammar Girl website and read the pages on how to use semi-colons and colons.
2. Then you will explain how to use each mark in your own words with examples for each rule.
3. Your examples should be about Crime and Punishment or Dorian Gray.
Semicolons and colons have been confusing high school students for years. Especially when a paper comes back marked up with confusing questions on, “why didn’t you put a semicolon or colon here” as was my case. After receiving the essay back, colons were inserted in red all over my paper to separate whole sentence introductions to quotes from the quotes themselves. Knowing the difference between colons and semicolons plays a major role in a high school and college student’s education.
ReplyDeleteAs mentioned on Grammar Girl, the main difference between a colon and a semicolon is that a colon can be used for both “unequal” and “equal” sentences while a semicolon can ONLY be used for “unequal” sentences. A colon is usually used to provide an introduction or a definition to the idea about to be expressed. A semicolon is usually used to separate two different ideas about the same topic. One example of how a semicolon could be used in a sentence is as follows: “Teddy saw a dog; the dog had black and white spots.” Here is an example of how a colon could be used in a sentence: Crime and Punishment is a tale about a crime that results in the mental and physical punishment of the character: “’It was I who killed the old pawnbroker woman and her sister’” (Dostoyevsky 506). See the difference? In the first example, the two sentences are connected because they are both speaking about a dog and how Teddy saw that it had black and white spots and that is why a semicolon can be used. In the second example, the first part of the sentence is introducing the other part of the sentence which is a quote. Grammar Girl also mentions how a semicolon may be used to separate different items when a comma is already being used throughout the items. This is best demonstrated in A Picture of Dorian Gray all throughout chapter nine: “elaborate yellow Chinese hangings; books bound in tawny satins or fair blue silks, and wrought with… images; veils of lacis” (Wilde 142). As you can see, comma’s are already being used in some of the ideas, so listing the phrases with a comma would get confusing and inappropriate. In this instance, it is ok to use a semicolon in place of a comma. Semicolon and colon usage is important in creating a meaningful essay that limits the confusion a reader may feel.
-Bolger, J. 2
Colons and semicolons can be confusing. When I was younger and wasn't sure about which mark to use, I added the first one I saw and moved on with my paper. It couldn't matter, could it? As I've grown older, I've started to understand the important differences between the two marks. Using one mark as opposed to the other can drastically change the flow of my paper. Because of this, I appreciated the Grammar Girl article about the difference between colons and semicolons.
ReplyDeleteQuite simply, colons "introduce or define something". A colon is used when the two clauses are STRONGLY related. While a semicolon joins clauses that are related, a colon is more appropriate when the two clauses are so similar that the flow would be interrupted if they were separated. Grammar Girl says that colons are also more appropriate when the two clauses are unequal in length. A main clause should not be followed by a semicolon and then just one other word. In this case, a colon would be more appropriate. Here are some examples:
1). “That's just the point: an honest and sensitive man opens his heart, and the man of business goes on eating - and then he eats you up.” In the case, we see the colon being used to join together two clauses that are different in length (4 words vs. 22 words). Not only are the clauses different lengths, but the colon is also introducing the point. A semicolon would not be appropriate to make this introduction.
2). In The Picture of Dorian Gray, women are degraded and shown to be inferior to their male counterparts: they are decorative sex (47). Again, the clauses are unbalanced and a semicolon would not be appropriate. But it is also important to note the similarity in the two clauses. The second could not stand by itself, and is therefore reliant on the first. This makes the colon the most appropriate grammatical mark (remember that they are used when the clauses are STRONGLY related).
The rules surrounding semicolons are slightly easier to understand. The semicolon is used best when the two clauses could stand by themselves. While the two clauses must be related for the sentence to flow, they do not have to rely on each other as strongly as for the colon. Unlike the colon, the semicolon is also appropriate when the two clauses are similar in length. Here are some examples:
1). In The Picture of Dorian Gray we see the power of artwork; it is artwork that leads Dorian to his suicide. In this example, the two sentences could stand alone, but the flow would be changed. The use of the semicolon ensures that there are not two short sentences right after each other and the clauses are similar in length. Clearly, the semicolon is most appropriate.
2). “Children begin by loving their parents; as they grow older they judge them; sometimes they forgive them.” This quote in Dorian Gray highlights where a semicolon is appropriate. A comma is not enough to set off the long clauses, so a semicolon can be used to ensure the sentence still flows.
In general, colons are used to introduce new ideas or when two clauses substantially differ in length. Semicolons are used when the two clauses could stand alone and when they are similar in length. Grammar Girl made these rules clear, and they are clearly evident in The a picture of Dorian Gray and Crime and Punishment.
Ryan M. 2
I have been afraid to misuse colons and especially semicolons in my writing for a very long time. Only in recent years have I understood their usage and their purpose. Semicolons, as GrammarGirl said, connect two relatively "equal" main clauses that pertain to the same topic. Colons, however, only separate "unequal" things, such as a single noun, introduction, or a further definition of the previous statement. Here are a few examples:
ReplyDelete1) Dorian Gray murdered the one true friend he had, the only person who cared about his well-being: Basil Hallward.
2) Lord Henry is an absolutely volatile, disgustingly manipulative person; his actions prompt Dorian's downfall.
3) Raskolnikov could only do one of two things: turn himself in, or await his inevitable capture.
4) Lizavetta was the one being abused by her older sister; Raskolnikov murdered them both.
- Bahr, S. 7/8*
I have always been a fan of the semi-colon. Basically, the semi-colon is meant to join two main clauses OF THE SAME WEIGHT. This means that the two clauses can exist without one another, and if they are combined by semi-colon, they will still yield the same significance. Semi-colons can also be used to separate items of a list; these items are usually more extensive as descriptions than the one-worded items. Grammar Girl hit the mark for why I use semi-colons. Whenever I feel that I am using too many conjunctions or if I have too many simple sentences, I turn to semi-colons. Also, whenever I use a conjunctive adverb (however is my favorite), I will use a semi-colon.
ReplyDeleteExamples of semi-colons from Crime and Punishment:
1) “that makes four roubles fifty-five copecks; five roubles for the underclothes” (Dostoevsky 124). The semi-colon in this example is used to connect two similar ideas about money. The first main clause gives a general amount of money. The second main clause gives another idea about the money.
2) “She was exceedingly fond of her husband; but he gave way to cards, got into trouble and with that he died” (14). This is an interesting example. Usually, today’s writing does not combine a semi-colon with a conjunction; however, Dostoevsky does. This may be due to the nuances that exist between two different time periods, more specifically the differences in two different eras of writing. Either way, the sentence undeniably uses the semi-colon to extend the first thought with the clause that follows the second; the two clauses have equal significance, allowing the appropriateness of the semi-colon.
Colons are meant to connect two clauses that are extremely connected to one another. If one is used without the other, the sentence would either lose value or it would not make sense. Colons are commonly used to introduce lists or provide a definition of the first clause in the sentence. Colons can also connect two clauses of different weights. This is why I use colons. Whenever I need to really emphasize a point or a person’s name, I will include a colon to emphasize the clauses that come after the colon.
Examples of colons from Crime and Punishment:
1) “There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (102). This example emphasizes the use of the colon for lists. The number of “articles” was given, and then a list of a description for each article followed the colon. Also, this is a good example for the semi-colon. After each description, a semi-colon is used to separate the descriptions of two different articles.
2) “And he talked so strangely: it seemed somehow comprehensible, but yet…” (385). The use of the colon complements the mysteriousness that is created by the ellipsis. By using a colon, Dostoevsky emphasizes the clause that comes after the colon, the idea that gives this sentence an ominous feel.
Srivastava R, 2
A semicolon connects two parts, or main clauses, that can ultimately stand on there own if needed. It is used to change up the structure of the piece and to also make the reader more focused on that certain sentence.
ReplyDeleteEx: "When hr eslked psdy, he felt a nauseous, cowardly sensation; it made him wince, and he was ashamed of it" (Dostoyevsky 1). -----This here connects 2 main clauses, because each could be there own sentence.
Same with this example on page 38, "'As long as I'm alive this marriage will not take place; Mr. Luzhin can go to hell!'"
A colon can only be put to use when a complete sentence it made. Its purpose is to elaborate on the sentence. It can also be helpful for listing ideas, introducing a quote, and making the text easier to comprehend.
Ex: "Some time ago he had made up his mind: 'Throw it all in the canal, all the traces into the water, and the business is done" (Dostoyevsky 102). ----Introduces quote
Ex: "'Especially while I was sitting in the train on the way here. I thought: didnt I contribute to all this...bad luck...by upsetting her morally in some way, or something of that sort?" (Dostoyevsky 270) ---elaborating on his idea
Asturi, V 7/8
Prior to my junior year of high school, I never really used semicolons and colons because I was scared of misusing them. The usage of both semicolons and colons can appear to be scary when you learn about them in Mrs. Perrin’s Honors Language Arts class freshman year. But, after reviewing the usage of colons and semicolons prior to taking the ACT my junior year, I feel more confident and apprehensive to use them in my writing because they really do enhance the flow and syntax of sentences.
ReplyDeleteA semicolon is a punctuation mark that separates two complete sentences. These two complete sentences should be very closely related to one another. Using a semicolon helps the reader to identify that there is a relationship between the two clauses. When using a semicolon, it is necessary to make sure that the two clauses are equal to one another: This helps to increase the flow of sentences. Another aspect of semicolons that people typically confuse is when to differentiate the use between semicolons and commas. If you use a conjunction between the two clauses, you would use a comma, but if no conjunction is being used, you would use a semicolon.
1. The Picture of Dorian Gray: “’Never marry at all, Dorian. Men marry because they are tired; women, because they are curious: both are disappointed,’” (34)
2. Crime and Punishment: “Don’t be overwise; fling yourself straight into life, without deliberation; don’t be afraid - the flood will bear you to the bank and set you safe on your feet again,” (466).
A colon is a punctuation mark that can be used between two complete sentences, or a complete sentence with an incomplete sentence. A colon is used between clauses to explain and define the former sentence. Colons can be used to introduce lists as well, as long as the list is associated with the sentence before the colon. A colon never follows a fragment or incomplete sentence. Fragments and incomplete sentences are not to be confused with dependent clauses. Unlike semicolons, colons do not have to come in between two equal clauses. In fact, the two clauses that a colon separates are usually unequal.
Examples:
1. The Picture of Dorian Gray: Lord Henry had many character flaws in the novel that annoyed the reader: arrogance, frankness, and rudeness.
2. Crime and Punishment: Roskolinikov is a very strange character in the novel: He killed an old lady on account that he has free choice!
I never truly understood the purpose or significance of a colon in a piece of literature before I reached high school. Even now I find the semi-colon to be far more useful and flexible in my writing than a colon ever could be. Semi-colons separate two closely related main clauses that could stand on their own individually. They can replace periods to add variety to piece of literature’s sentence structure. The main difference been a colon and a semi-colon is that a colon is used to introduce or define an idea. A colon can be used to connect ideas of unequal significance, while a semi-colon can only be used to connect ideas of equal significance. A colon can only be used to connect a noun with a main clause.
ReplyDeleteExamples of colons and semi-colons in The Picture of Dorian Gray
1. Lord Henry states, “Men marry because they are tired; women, because they are curious: both are disappointed,’” (Wilde 34). The first and second clauses could both stand on their own, but Wilds joins them with a semi-colon to draw attention to the relationship between the clauses and to prevent writing too many short choppy sentences. Wilde uses a colon at the end of his sentence to elaborate upon the fact that both married women and married men are unhappy with their married lives.
2. Basil states, “Yes: you led them there, and yet you can smile, as you are smiling now” (Wilde 96). A colon is used define Basil’s idea that Dorian Gray does not care about the fact that he led to the downfall of the men in his life.
Examples of colons and semi-colons in Crime and Punishment
1. “There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (Dostoyevsky 102). A colon is used to list the items that he saw and to describe them in greater detail. A semi-colon is used at the end of the sentence to connect the “four small leather cases” to the eight articles, but the main clause could stand on its own.
2. “The fact was that up to the last moment he had never expected such an ending; he had been overbearing to the last degree, never dreaming that two destitute and defenseless women could ever escape from his control” (Dostoyevsky 233-234). Dostoyevsky uses a semicolon to draw emphasis to the fact that Pyotr never anticipated the fact that Dounia could ever leave him because of her lower social standing.
Judele C, 2nd
Even up until this point, the differences between the colon and the semi colon have given me a run for my money. For that reason, I avoided using them like the plague. After reading the article by Grammar Girl, I believe I have come to understand them a bit better. This is a list of what I have come to understand about when to use colons: lists, joining two main phrases and joining a main phrase with a noun. The list can continue after that with more examples. The use of colons to introduce joining a noun to a main phrase can be seen in Crime and Punishment, “There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (Dostoyevsky 102). In this case, both colons and semi colons are in play. The semi colon is used to join two equal phrases that would stand on their own if need be. This means each part has to be a complete thought or idea and they must be closely related. Semi colons also separate items that need commas which occur in a list. This is shown in the example above from Crime and Punishment. Both semi colons and colons are necessary in writing as they add flow to writing. This is evident as they are both used in important literary works including Crime and Punishment as seen above, but also A Picture of Dorian Gray. Lord Henry is quoted as saying, “Men marry because they are tired; women, because they are curious: both are disappointed,’” (38). In this quote, correct use of colons and semi colons are shown. The semi colon is used in connecting two parts that have equal weigh: the idea of men and women. The colon connects a phrase that is related but not nearly as long.
ReplyDeleteM. McGregor 2
1) In order to correctly use a semicolon it should be used as a separator. This is often signified by words like again, furthermore, and however. You use this to separate two main clauses. You may also use one if you want to vary sentence structure because consequently; you have been using a lot of choppy sentences.
ReplyDeletea. Ex) “‘You won’t? Then I must do it myself,’ said the young man; and he tore the curtain from its rod, and flung it on the ground” (Wilde 13.8)
i. I like this example because often times writers just say “so-and-so said” and then go along with their description in another sentence right after. Wilde has combined the two using a semicolon.
b. Ex) “This seemed to amaze him; he somehow thought he would find everything as he left it, even perhaps the corpses in the same place on the floor” (Dostoevsky 2.6.153)
i. This is an example that shows it can vary sentence structure because Dostoevsky could have said, “This seemed to amaze him” stopped there, and then started a new sentence. His use of the semicolon has given his work more flow.
2) A colon is used to join two sentences where one could stand on their own if necessary and the other could not. You must use a colon if you are going to join a main clause with a noun. This means that yes, both a semicolon and a colon can be used when joining two main clauses, but a semicolon does not have the strength to carry a single noun so you must use a colon in that case.
a. Ex) “I think that would be a rather nice excuse: it would have all the surprise of candor” (Wilde 2.99)
i. This is an example of how a colon has the ability to carry two main clauses.
b. Ex) “And here was something new again: the mysterious meetings with Lizaveta and both of them – religious maniacs” (Dostoevsky 4.4.147)
i. This is another example of a colon carrying two main clauses just like a semicolon does.
Dame, E 2
On many occasions, I have questioned myself on the usage of the colon and semicolons. After reading the grammar girl blog, I feel more confident in my understanding. A semicolon is used to connect two clauses that could be separate sentences into one. If you have two sentences and want to switch up the sentence structure, a semicolon can be used to do that. A colon is used to help connect two ideas or clauses that a similar to one another. A colon can be used to introduce a list, or two different parts of equal or unequal weight. Overall, a semicolon connects two things of similar weight, while a colon can connect two clauses that are of different weight.
ReplyDeleteAn example in the Picture of Dorian Gray is found on page 6 when Basil states, “No: I wont sent it anyway,” (Wilde 6). This example uses a colon because it is not connecting clauses of equal weight, but more of an unequal stance. The first part does not carry a subject or a verb, while the second part carries both of them, demonstrating the different weights.
Another example of a colon is on page 26 when Lorde Henry states, “I think that would be a rather nice excuse, it would have all the surprise of a candour,” (Wilde 26). The colon in place helps define the second clause, and that is why a semicolon is not used.
Looking at semicolon, one example is found on page 31 when it states, “To project one’s soul into some gracious form, and let it tarry there for a moment; to hear one’s own intellectual views echoed back to one with all the added music of passion and youth;” (Wilde 31). This section compares two equal clauses which each carry a subject and verb. They are similar and that is why a semicolon is used.
One last example is on page 90 when it states, “No; I did it myself,” (Wilde 90). The semicolon connects the two clauses because they are continuations of one another. They are a similar idea, which makes them alike.
Wasylko, G 7/8th
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ReplyDeleteThe purpose of a semi-colon is to join two related, independent clauses. The easiest way to know if you’re using a semi-colon correctly is to replace it with a period and check to see if it still makes sense. The clause before and the clause after the semi-colon must be independent – meaning they are both complete sentences that can stand on their own. The first letter of the first word after the semi-colon must be lowercase unless it is a proper noun. You use a semi-colon when there is a deeper connection between the two sentences than a period would suggest.
ReplyDeleteExample: “It is not he who is revealed by the painter; it is rather the painter who, on the coloured canvas, reveals himself” (Wilde 4). The semi-colon here connects two related clauses that are capable of standing as separate sentences.
The purpose of a colon is either to introduce a list or elaborate on a preceding thought. It is used between an independent introductory clause and a final clause that defines or further explains the previous sentence.
Example: “I grew afraid, and turned to quit the room. It was not conscience that made me do so: it was a sort of cowardice” (Wilde 5). The colon here serves to clarify the reason Basil left. The final clause elaborates on the previous thought by defining why he “quit the room.”
Keller N 7/8
I love to use semicolons in my writing; most often I use them to show how closely two ideas are related to each other. Oscar Wilde, the author of A Picture of Dorian Grey, concurred with me on this idea. Here’s an example of his work: “The sitter is merely the accident, the occasion. It is not he who is revealed by the painter; the painter who, on the colored canvas, reveals himself” (pages 4-5). Wilde could have separated these ideas into two sentences and the line would have read just fine. However, since they are so closely linked, he decided the connection would be heightened if they were in the same sentence.
ReplyDeleteColons, I have seen, are usually used to introduce a new idea into a sentence without it needing to be as directly connected to the earlier statement, as the semicolon requires. This idea can either be a complete thought or a list, and the phrase before it often has little substance. A prime example of this can be found in Dostoyevsky’s Crime and Punishment: “Allow me to ask you another question out of simple curiosity: have you ever spent a night on a hay barge, on the Neva?” (1.2.7). The first clause has very little meaning when compared to the second, and is simply there to introduce the main question.
Maslach, K 2
I never understood the difference between a colon and a semicolon so I basically always used a colon. It was no big deal to me because I just thought they were the same thing. However, after reading the article from Grammar Girl, I realized that I am wrong. There actually are differences, and I hope to be able to not abuse them anymore. The semicolon is used to link two ideas together, or to represent two ideas as related. Two ideas/ sentences could stand on their own, but a semicolon may be used to relate them and make them so they no longer stand on their own. A colon however is used to make an introduction or to define something. Another use of a colon is to link a main clause with a noun. One example of the use of a semicolon from “Crime and Punishment” is on page 38 “As long as I'm alive this marriage will not take place; Mr. Luzhin can go to hell!” The semicolon is being used to relate the two ideas, which the idea of the marriage makes Rodia angry, and the offender of the marriage makes him so angry he wishes him to go to hell. An example of a semicolon used in Dorian Gray is “It is not he who is revealed by the painter; it is rather the painter who, on the coloured canvas, reveals himself” (Wilde 4). The semicolon is being used to link ideas together and keep the sentence flowing. An example of a colon being used in “Crime and Punishment” is seen when it says “There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (Dostoyevsky 102). The colon is being used to introduce the list and the items in the list. In Dorian Gray it is seen when Lord Henry says “Never marry at all, Dorian. Men marry because they are tired; women, because they are curious: both are disappointed” (Wilde 34). The colon is used to explain what the ending result is in both cases.
ReplyDeleteBunting, A 2nd
To this day, I have been confused on the correct way to use semicolons and colons. I was never sure which was more appropriate in different situations and sentences. I knew how to use colons in most cases, but semicolons were in a world I had never touched. By avoiding using semicolons, I never really found out how to correctly use them. After reading “Semicolons” on Grammar Girl, I now know the difference between the two and how to use them in writing.
ReplyDeleteSemicolons are way to separate two clauses that are very similar and could stand alone in their own sentences, but are kept together to make one sentence more interesting. In Crime and Punishment by Fyodor Dostoyevsky, he writes, “Raskolnikoff’s anger grew in consequence; he could hardly help returning the magistrate’s look with an imprudently scornful glance” (Dostoyevsky 258). These two clauses could have easily been separated, but by using the semicolon, Raskolnikoff’s anger is described more in depth. By keeping the two clauses together, the reader easily sees how the two clauses relate to each other. As Raskolnikoff’s anger grew, he could not help looking scornfully at the magistrate. By using the semicolon, Dostoyevsky shows how the second clause directly relates to the first.
Colons and semicolons are similar because they both create separation in a sentence, but a colon is used to make lists or to add dependent clauses. Colons can add an incomplete thought to a sentence that stands on its own. The two separated clauses are unbalanced and unequal. Dostoyevsky writes, “She raised her handkerchief to her lips, and silently showed it to Raskolnikoff: it was stained with blood” (Dostoyevsky 301). The part of the sentence before the colon is much longer than what follows the colon, making it unbalanced. From The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde, Lord Henry says to Dorian Gray, “‘Men marry because they are tired; women, because they are curious: both are disappointed’” (Wilde 34). This shows both the use of colons and semicolons. The semicolon shows the two separated, equal sided clauses, the first describing why men marry and the second describing why women marry. The colon shows unbalanced parts of the sentence. The clause following the colon is short, but still helps to add to the sentence how women and men are when they marry.
Hornung, A. 7/8
Semicolons and colons can be difficult without a strong grasp on the English language. It was only in recent years that I’ve learned the difference between the two and even then it wasn’t entirely easy or intuitive. I still avoid colons and semicolons if I feel uncomfortable determining which one to use.
ReplyDeleteSemicolons, according to Grammar Girl, are sentence splicers. They separate independent clauses that are closely related. Semicolons could be replaced with a period, but periods cannot always be replaced by semicolons. Semicolons join equally weighted clauses but periods break apart these clauses. Semicolons preserve flow. Some examples from the books we have read in class include:
“Don’t be overwise; fling yourself straight into life, without deliberation; don’t be afraid - the flood will bear you to the bank and set you safe on your feet again,” (Dostoyevsky 466)
"“Oh, there is really very little to tell, Harry,” answered the painter; “and I am afraid you will hardly understand it.” (Wilde 13)
Colons, however, can be harder to use. Colons are use to “introduce or define something.” Colons can be used like semicolons (to join equally weighted clauses), but they can also be used to join a main clause to a noun. Colons can be used for equal or unequal things. Colons are more versatile than semicolons. Both Dostoyevsky and Wilde implement colons in their writing:
“I like to meet young people: one learns new things from them.” (Dostoyevsky 118)
“Over and over again Dorian used to read this fantastic chapter, and the two chapters immediately following, in which, as in some curious tapestries or cunningly-wrought enamels, were pictured the awful and beautiful forms of those whom Vice and Blood and Weariness had made monstrous or mad: Filippo, Duke of Milan, who slew his wife, and painted her lips with a scarlet poison that her lover might suck death from the dead thing he fondled…” (Wilde 188)
-Kett, J 2
Semi colons are used to separate to closely related main causes of equal weight.
ReplyDelete“He played with this idea, and grew willful; tossed it into the air and transformed it; let it escape and recaptured it; made it iridescent with fancy, and winged it with paradox” (Wilde 41).
The semi colon here is used to add variety to the sentence structure as noted in the grammar girl explanation. Also, the clauses are all closely related to each other because it talks about the same description of Lord Henry’s idea and the sentence would be able to stand on its own if the author were to take out the comma and insert a period.
Colons are used to introduce or explain something within the second sentence that cannot stand on its own from the leading sentence.
“But a sort of absentmindedness, even something like reverie, began gradually to take possession of him: as if he forgot himself at moments” (Dostoevsky 103).
The colon in Dostoevsky quote serves to further explain his feeling of absentmindedness and connection the prior sentence because the description would not be able to stand on its own.
Though I may be extremely incorrect in saying this, but I feel as though I use colons and semi-colons appropriately most of the time. Basically, colons are used to introduce or define something, and semi-colons are used to join things of “equal weight” as the website says. Colons and semi-colons can both be used to join main clauses but colons and only colons can be used to link a main clause with a noun. Semi-colons should never be used with coordinating conjunctions.
ReplyDeleteRaskolnikov, besides himself, loved on above all others: Sonya.
Raskolnikov has an incredibly frenzied mind; the old pawnbroker was a victim of said mind.
Dunya had two choices: marry Luzhin or live in poverty.
Luzhin was quite narcissistic; Dunya rejected him.
Crow, M 7/8
Personally, colons have never been too difficult for me to understand. While some people struggle with the placement of colons, I often enjoyed learning about it and excelled in it. When it comes to semi-colons, however, the situation is not quite the same. Semi-colons have always confused me, as I have never been completely sure on when and where to use them. Thanks to Grammar Girl, I now have a little bit better of a grasp on semi-colons.
ReplyDeleteSemi-colons, like commas, separate things. The only difference is that semi-colons separate two main clauses that are closely related to each other, but could also stand alone as their own sentences. So basically, if the semi-colon were to be taken out and replaced with a period, both clauses on each side of the semi-colon should be able to stand as their own independent sentences.
“It is not he who is revealed by the painter; it is rather the painter who, on the coloured canvas, reveals himself” (Wilde 4). This quote from Oscar Wilde’s The Picture of Dorian Gray is a perfect example of a semi-colon use. Both clauses on either side of the semi-colon are talking about a painter and his work, so they are closely related; however, if the semi-colon were to be taken out, they could both be their own sentence. It is important to know that semi-colons are not to be used when connecting clauses with conjunctions such as “and” or “but”, but only when connecting two main clauses. When writing with adverbs such as “however” or “nonetheless”, semi-colons are allowed to be used.
As for colons, they are used to introduce and/or define things. They are also used for lists. For example, in Dostoyevsky’s Crime and Punishment, the colon is used in multiple instances: “And here was something new again: the mysterious meetings with Lizaveta and both of them – religious maniacs” (Dostoyevsky 147). In this sentence, the colon is used to separate two clauses and introduce the second one of the sentence. In the first clause, we are told that there was something new again, and then we are introduced to the second clause with a colon, in which we learn afterwards that the first clause is referencing the, “mysterious meetings with Lizaveta” (Dostoyevsky 147).
The difference between colons and semi-colons is that colons have the ability to join things of both equal and unequal weight, while semi-colons can only join those of equal weight. Colons have a bit more power, as they can be used two join two main clauses, as well as to join a main clause with a noun. Semi-colons cannot join a clause with a noun. Due to how similar colons and semi-colons are, they can be easily confused, but these rules will help keep me straight, and I will reference then whenever I feel the need to.
Shaniuk, B 7/8
If semicolons and colons were easy for all people to distinguish between, this blog post would not exist. However, they are for some people, including me.
ReplyDeleteSemicolons are used to mash two sentences together, used to taste by the writer based on what affect they want their writing to have. Semicolons can substitute for periods, but periods can not always substitute for semicolons. An example from literature in class:
“The sitter is merely the accident, the occasion. It is not he who is revealed by the painter; the painter who, on the colored canvas, reveals himself” (Dostoevsky; pages 4-5).
Colons are typically used to introduce a new idea without the second clause needing to relate to the first clause. It can be a complete thought or a list. An example of its use within the literature:
“I think that would be a rather nice excuse: it would have all the surprise of candor” (Wilde 2.99)
-Javorsky, R 2
In my opinion, as was reinforced by the website provided, the main difference between a colon and a semi-colon comes down to two things: clauses and ideas. Through my various ACT practice and the article provided, the colon focuses on a complete and an incomplete idea. Although it can also be focused on two complete ideas (individual sentences), it is the only punctuation used for partial concepts. For instance, His best friend Matt had a brother: Joe. As where semi-colons do not have this function are just two complete sentences merged together. However, what I learned from the article that I had not known before is that content plays a part in punctuation. For instance, semi-colons are often used in sentences to combine very close ideas or concepts. For example, it is appropriate to use a semi-colon in “he lost his cat; he needed to start searching” and it is more appropriate to use a colon in “he lost his cat: Nibbles was his name”. In my opinion, the article presented a lot of the subtleties that we tend to overlook, however, it is these subtleties, when used right, that allow us to create a more impactful, consistent piece.
ReplyDeleteExamples of this consistency are found in the works of The Picture of Dorian Gray and Crime and Punishment. Both novels take the punctuation described and utilize it to elevate their work, and to create better understanding and flow within their pieces.
For example let us start with the semi-colon.
1. “They were continually making plans for the future; both counted on settling in Siberia within five years at least” (Dostoyevsky Epilogue, 1.13)
2. "An artist should create beautiful things, but should put nothing of his own life into them; we live in an age when men treat art as if it were meant to be a form of autobiography; we have lost the abstract sense of beauty." (1.21)
In both pieces the semi-colon is used to connect continuing ideas that are complete sentences to make long, flowing works. This use aids in are ability to understand as readers; as well as adds length and longevity to the portion of the work.
Let us continue into Colons.
1. “But that is the beginning of a new story: the story of the gradual renewal of a man, the story of his gradual regeneration, of his passing from one world into another” (Dostoyevsky Epigraph, 2.30).
2. “Some one has killed herself for love of you. I wish that I had ever had such an experience. It would have made me in love with love for the rest of my life. The people who have adored me -- there have not been very many, but there have been some -- have always insisted on living on, long after I had ceased to care for them, or they to care for me. They have become stout and tedious, and when I meet them, they go in at once for reminiscences” (Wilde 8.16).
In these particular instances, colons cause their pieces to be more direct. The take out a lot of the longevity and replace it with directness and on-point information. Colons, in their own way, add to the flow and understanding of the reader. Providing direct, non-flowering information, which creates a level of suspense and interest within the piece.
Semi-Colons and Colons each have their own purpose in a work and they are important stepping-stones in allowing us to best maximize the flow and understanding of our works. I am glad we got to do this exercise, to better establish our voice and style as writers.
Megan Lear 2nd
A semi colon and a colon are used for different purposes within ones writing. A colon (:) is used to join things together in a sentence. It is commonly noticed and used when listing things. It can also be used in a sentence to recite things. For a semi colon (;), I personally use it when joining two statements together. If there are two sentences that have similar topics, then they can be combined with a semi colon, as long as one sentence isn’t too heavy in detail or format.
ReplyDeleteOften a semi colon is used when combining ideas and sentences that have similar topics. Taking a look at Oscar Wilde’s Picture of Dorian Gray the example use of a semi colon is properly used. “I think that would be a rather nice excuse; it would have all the surprise of a candour.” (Wilde 26). If you replaced the semi colon with a period then the sentence would still flow smoothly. However Wilde makes a semi colon and joins the relating phrases together, because it is appropriate to do so.
A colon is used when reciting is used. It can be used when listing things and even joining two phrases together that may or may not be equal in content. One can easily use a colon when listing things off. When looking at Dorian Gray once again, readers can agree that Lord Henry’s personality can be described as follows: arrogant, sexist, rude, candor and aristocratic. The colon (:) was used while listing the typical qualities of Lord Henry. Overall, semi colon can join sentences with similar topics, while colons are used to recite and list things.
Turnea, D 2nd Period
Incorrect semi-colon and colon use has plagued the essays of high-schoolers for years. Most tend to avoid their use if possible. However, sometimes it is necessary to use either or. Thus, knowing how and when to use them comes in handy.
ReplyDeleteAccording to the Grammar Girl website, semi-colons are used to separate two independent clauses, or main clauses, that are closely related. One knows if these are independent clauses if it is possible for them to stand alone as their own sentences. An example of this is: Sybil was a great actress; Dorian loved her acting. Semi-colons are used, as the Grammar Girl website put it, “to join things of equal weight”. This meaning that the clauses used must be equal, such as: Razumihin was Rodya’s friend; he took care of sick Royda. The clauses are equal because they can both stand by themselves if need be.
A colon is used to introduce or define something. These two things must be strongly related to each other and the second clause must relate back to the first clause directly. An example of this is: Rodya checked the hole in the wall: it was empty. This works because, like an example from the Grammar Girl website, the “it” of the second clause strongly and directly relates to the “hole” in the first clause. This shows the defining of an object as it defines the appearance of the whole in the wall. Unlike semi-colons, colons can be used with things of equal or unequal weight. For example, a semi-colon can only connect two main clauses, but a colon can connect a main clause to a noun. An example of this is: Dorian truly only loved one thing: himself. As one can also see, an example of using a colon to introduce some thing is used as I say “An example of this is:” when I introduce an example.
Other than the reasons mentioned above, semi-colons are used to make winky faces and colons are used to make smiley faces. Getting them mixed up can make harmless comments and texts kind of awkward. :) ;)
-C. Lenhoff 2nd period
’m always afraid that I will confuse semi colons and colons in my writing. I’m also pretty certain that sometimes I do. When I was little I did not think it mattered which one I used and picked which ever one looked right and then would move on. This made a very bad habit for me of misusing these punctuation marks.
ReplyDeleteA semicolon is a punctuation mark that is used to join to completely different sentences. Meaning, that if separated these two sentences could stand on their own. As Grammar Girl says, “They separate independent clauses that are closely related”.
Unlike a semicolon the clauses joined together with a colon can not stand on their own. It can be used to connect ideas of unequal significance and introduces or defines something. It is used when the two clauses are strongly related
“Dorian Gray murdered the one true friend he had, the only person who cared about his well-being: Basil Hallward.” This excerpt shows shows the proper use of a colon. If separated these two clauses could not stand on their own.
“Don’t be overwise; fling yourself straight into life, without deliberation; don’t be afraid - the flood will bear you to the bank and set you safe on your feet again,” (Dostoyevsky 466). This quote shows the proper use of a semi colon. If separated out these sentences could stand on their own and are closely related clauses.
The difference between a colon and semi-colon depends on the sentence structure. Two clauses that can stand alone may use a colon. A semi-colon could not be used in a situation where there are one or more incomplete sentences. For example, “Raskolnikov committed several crimes: money was the driving force.” This could mean either a colon or semi colon could be used. These could stand alone, but since the topics are heavily related, the colon is added to create strong sentence structure. Also, introducing a list would involve a colon. The crimes were adding up: killing, stealing, all crimes by one man.“
ReplyDeleteWhen using a conjunctive adverb such as “however,” a semi-colon must be used, because if divided, these sentences could not stand alone. A colon inserted here would mean the two parts could stand alone, but they cannot; therefore, a semi colon is used. For example, “Dorian was unaware of the changing picture at first; however, he found out over time that he was the reason for the aging of the portrait.”
-Camille
The colon and semicolon are similar grammatical constructs, but they are different in their own right. The semicolon’s major function is to separate the elements of a sentence. The clauses that the semicolon separates are often closely related, but can stand on their own. The following quote is an example of the semicolon in action from “Crime and Punishment”
ReplyDelete“All that infamy had obviously only touched her mechanically, not one drop of real depravity had penetrated to her [Sonia's] heart; he [Raskolnikov] saw that” (Dostoyevsky 104).
Here the semicolon can be observed as a connector between the description of Sonia’s heart, and Raskolnikov’s observation of the “mechanical” nature of Sonia’s heart. Unlike the semicolon, the colon is used to call attention to the words following it. The colon is often used to announce a list of quotation following the first clause. This quote from “The Picture of Dorian Grey” showcases the colon’s purpose:
“"Dorian Gray is my dearest friend," he said. "He has a simple and a beautiful nature. Your aunt was quite right in what she said of him. Don't spoil him. Don't try to influence him. Your influence would be bad. The world is wide, and has many marvellous people in it. Don't take away from me the one person who gives to my art whatever charm it possesses: my life as an artist depends on him. Mind, Harry, I trust you." He spoke very slowly, and the words seemed wrung out of him almost against his will” (Wilde 89).
It can be seen in this quote that the colon calls attention to Hallward’s dependence on Dorian’s beauty. While the colon and semicolon have incredibly similar functions, it can be seen in these two quotes that they stand separately in how they are used.
Bruggeman, Jacob 7/8th
Semi-colons and colons have had a long history of misuse. In the early stages of my writing, I would place the punctuation marks wherever I pleased. In some circumstances, I would be correct in my placement and other times, not so much. Grammar Girl has given incite to all who misuse the marks and has brought light to the timeless issue.
ReplyDeleteSemi-colons, in short, connect two phrases that have the potential to be their own sentences. The main clauses are related, but are equally capable of standing on their own. A semi-colon also creates a steady flow throughout the text and connects the two clauses in a close relationship, most times of equal length.
1. “He decided to take the ring, and sought out the old woman; at first sight, before he knew anything about her, he felt and irresistible dislike of her” (Dostoevsky 60). Each part in the text could stand on its own and be two separate sentences. However, the first part relates closely to the second and can be combined without issue. Also, the two phrases are of similar length. The semi-colon is the best place for this.
2. “His good look are really quite remarkable; everybody notices them” (Wilde 68). In this sentence, each part relates to each other, but can, again, be their own sentence. A semi-colon is also proper because of the equally weighted clauses.
A colon, on the other hand, is used for different reasons. A colon brings attention to a new subject. It introduces a phrase. Following the colon is information that strongly relates back to the introduced text. Unlike a semi-colon, a colon connects text that can be a variety of lengths.
1. “He had two things suitable for pawning: his father’s old silver watch and a gold ring set with three little red stones, given to him as a keepsake by his sister when they parted” (Dostoevsky 60). Each part of this sentence varies differently in length: the first part being much shorter. Also, the sentence introduces the items that can be pawned. It would not be appropriate for any other punctuation mark to be used in this sentence because the second part cannot stand on its own and relates very strongly to the first part.
2. “One thing, however, he felt that it had done for him: it had made him conscious how unjust, how cruel, he had been to Sibyl Vane” (Wilde 99). This sentence introduces what Dorian Gray was feeling, with the colon. Following the colon are the feelings in which he had. The colon connects the two parts that are strongly related. The second part is dependent on the first. The phrases are of distinct unequal length, and cannot stand on their own appropriately.
Cika, M 2
I am a big contributor to the abuse to semi colons. I am brave enough to admit that it has always been confusing to me on where and when to properly use them. But, the article from Grammar Girl really did help clear up some confusion for me. The way she referred it to “conjunction junction” helped me the most because that really has stuck with me.
ReplyDeleteReferring to semicolons, they are punctuation marks that can be used to separate two clauses that could stand alone. They are used in writing to give sentences more diversity and to help the reader keep focus. But they can only be used if the clauses are connected in some way. Meaning that have to be related to the same topic.
An example of the use of semi colons can be found in Crime and Punishment by Fyodor Dostoevsky.
1. I am convinced that he will be generous and delicate enough to invite me and to urge me to remain with my daughter for the future, and if he has said nothing about it hitherto, it is simply because it has been taken for granted; but I shall refuse.” (39)
Moving along to colons, they can be used with two complete sentences or one incomplete with a complete. It is mostly used in order to define something within a sentence. I personally do not use these often. And even after reading the article I am still kind of confused on how to truly use them. But nevertheless, and example can be located within The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde.
1. “Men marry because they are tired, women, because they are curious: both are disappointed.”
A semi-colon, colon, and comma are all punctuations that are used all used to make reading easier on the audience. They are rules that almost all authors abide by set in place by the fore founders of our language. Through the years however, the rules have become confused and many people no longer know the difference. I must admit that I am fairly terrible when it comes to using the two correctly. I found the explanation given on grammar girl very helpful. As it stated simply how they were used as well as how people may become confused by them. A colon is used to introduce and sometimes define something even if it is just a noun. They can also be used to list things. Meanwhile a semicolon connects clauses of equal weight. This means that they both must be independent clauses that were adjoined together. This may be confusing as the use is similar to a comma. A comma though has to have a coordinating conjunction word. Although it may be difficult to understand the different rules for punctuation in most cases it is vital to know them for proper writing.
ReplyDelete“It is not he who is revealed by the painter; it is rather the painter who, on the coloured canvas, reveals himself”(Wilde 4). In this situation Oscar Wilde uses semicolons and colons to help the reader understand what he is trying to say. The semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses of equal length. Like grammar girl explained they are two railroad cars, as apposed to a railroad car and a caboose. The commas are then used to list the actions of the painter.
“There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (Dostoevsky 102). In this case a semicolon is not possible to be used. The proper usage is a colon because these are two clauses of unequal length. On clause is dependent upon the other. The second part of the sentence defines what the eight articles of clothing were.
Sansone A, 2
I remember Mrs. Perrin had a whole lecture on sentence structure freshmen year and one of the big concepts that she rammed into our brains was the proper use of colons and semicolons. Even after that lecture I still got them confused often. Now, after years of writing papers and teachers marking them wrong when I mis-used colons and semicolons, I think I got the point. Semicolons are used to connect two ideas that are similar and can relate to each other, but if one wanted to they could stand individually with a period in between them and those sentences would still make sense. A colon is used to introduce things such as quotes. They can also be used to define things.
ReplyDeleteAn example of this in The Picture of Dorian Gray is: "He played with the idea, and grew wilful; tossed it into the air and transformed it" (Wilde 30). The semicolon here separates the two sentences but it is clear that they both are similar and are connected.
An example of a colon in Crime and Punishment is: " "No need to explain that! And it wasn't the paint only: the fever had been coming on for a month" " (Dostoyevsky 153). The colons here introduce the second part to sentence that reinforces the first idea.
Galvan. E 2nd
In all honesty, I never use semi-colons or colons in my writing, solely because I do not know how to use them properly and whenever spell check says to use either or I never trust it. I usually just stick with my commas and conjunctions but after reading and understanding the difference I’m feeling a little more confident.
ReplyDeleteExample for Semi-Colon
When using a semi-colon it shouldn’t be mistaken with replacing it with a comma alone. Whenever putting two independent clauses together that have something in common in subject that is when a semi colon can be inserted, or a comma and conjunction. The two statements can stand alone and balance out the sentence, just like the example below from the novel, The Picture of Dorian Gray. Each sentence can stand alone if needed and they have the same subject in common of having Dorian go with Lord Henry.
“I would sooner come with you; yes, I feel I must come with you” (Wilde 47).
Example for Colon
For colons, it’s the opposite. Colons connect an independent clause and a noun or clause that makes the sentence unbalanced. But the two have to have a subject in common to be used properly. For the example below, also from Dorian Gray, the first half of the statement talks about what its like when talking to Dorian using multiple similes. After the colon was still talking about how it is talking to Dorian but in a literal sense of emotion coming from it, keeping the subject the same between the two clauses.
“…to convey ones temperament into another, as thought it were a subtle fluid or a strange perfume: there was a real joy in that – perhaps that most satisfying joy left to us in an age so limited and vulgar as our own, an age grossly carnal in its pleasures, and grossly common in its aims” (Wilde 39).
S. Güt 7/8
Being the Grammar Queen that I am, I’d like to think that I am very careful with my uses of colons and semicolons, and hopefully I never use them incorrectly. It is easy to know when to use them if you have a very strong knowledge of grammar, and it really isn’t too difficult to learn. Colons are used when making lists, such as: “This house was let out in tiny tenements and was inhabited by working people of all kinds: tailors, locksmiths, cooks, Germans of sorts, girls picking up a living as best they could, petty clerks, etc.” (Dostoyevsky 3). They are also used when, as Grammar Girl states, there are unequal “things.” You can think of it as if there is a Mommy clause and a baby noun, and the baby noun needs the stability of that extra period in the colon to stay attached. However, if there are two equal clauses that are strong and independent (and don’t need no man), then you use a semicolon, as long as their topics are related. You cannot use a semicolon to connect two clauses that have nothing to do with each other. An example of this is: “At these moments he would become conscious that his ideas were sometimes in a tangle and that he was very weak; for two days he had scarcely tasted food” (Dostoyevsky 2). Dostoyevsky chose to use a semicolon here instead of a period because the second clause, although able to stand alone, explains why he is so weak, so it is natural to have it in the same sentence instead of beginning a new idea.
ReplyDelete-Dushek, K 2˚
Why are everyone’s posts so long…
ReplyDeleteSemi colons are used to connect two complete thoughts and colons are generally used to introduce something that will enhance the first part of the sentence.
Examples:
1. Dorian is obsessed with aesthetic beauty; he loses his self-worth as the painting deteriorates.
2. The most annoying character in literature (in my opinion): Lord Henry of Picture of Dorian Gray.
K Brav 7/8*
I feel like you made this blog because of my essays; I often use semi-colons and colons incorrectly. Was that correct? I think that’s right. Alright, so a semi-colon is used to separate two different clauses that could be two sentences, but instead we make them into one long sentence. In Crime and Punishment this is shown on page 215, “The man stole a look at him from under his brows and looked at him attentively, deliberately; then he turned slowly and went out of the gate into the street without saying a word.” The two clauses could be two different sentences, but because they are so closely related they are connected with a semi-colon. A colon is used to introduce something new, or to define it. I promise I looked in Dorian Gray but there is not too many colons, especially when I’m writing this two hours before it’s due. Wow now that I’m paying attention to it, C&P has a ton of semi-colons. Go Dostoyevsky. On page 107 a colon is used, “ “Oh, you particular gentlemen! Principles! You are worked by principles, as it were by springs: you won’t venture to turn round on your own account.” The second part of the sentence is used to further define the first part of the sentence. Alright happy snow day mom.
ReplyDeleteCali P 7/8
Semi colons and colons are very confusing, whether they are being used to make smiley faces or to connect clauses. Semi colons are also used to connect two main clauses that are related and have equal weight. Semi colons are often used to change up sentence structure, and help maintain continuity.
ReplyDeleteExample of Semi Colons
“He decided to take the ring, and sought out the old woman; at first sight, before he knew anything about her, he felt and irresistible dislike of her” (Dostoevsky 60). In this case, the two main clauses could stand to be own thein, however the semi colon makes them flow better than a period would.
Colons are very similar to semi colons, however they can be used to connect two clauses that DO NOT have equal weight. Clauses connected by a colon are not both independent. The colon shows a more distinct separation between the two clauses as well.
Examples of Colons
“There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (Dostoyevsky 102). The second clause is not independent, it cannot stand on it’s own, and the length of each clause is different.
Florek, E. 7/8
A semi colon is used to seperate two different, complete clauses and can be used to maintain continuity or to switch up sentence structure and make it more interesting. An example of a semi colon would be: "the man stole a look at him from under his brows and looked at him attentively, deliberately; then he turned slowly and went out the gate into the street without saying a word," (Dostoevsky 215). This quote separates to main clauses but maintains flow by connecting them due to their related subject matter.
ReplyDeleteA colon is used to introduce something new or to introduce a definition, or can be used before some sort of list. And example of a colon would be "there were eight articles in all:two little boxes with earrings or something of the sort, he hardly could see; then four small leather cases," (Dostoevsky 102). I chose this quote as it used both a colon and a semi colon and therefore it is easy to highlight the differences between the two. The colon introduces something new and also a list of items that Dostosvsky is describing. In turn, the semi colon separated the two main clauses while maintaining continuity.
-Harris, S 2*
I must admit that as a middle school student I went wild with semi-colons. My habit of their misuse may have even seeped into my freshman year. To be honest, I never had a teacher who stressed grammar's importance(besides spelling) until I had Mrs. Perrin.
ReplyDeleteColons are used for listing things, separating clauses where the second statement is dependent on the first, or introducing a quote. Appropriate examples include: “There were eight articles in all: two little boxes with ear-rings or something of the sort, he hardly looked to see; then four small leather cases” (102).
Semicolons differ through it's relationship between the two clauses it connects. Clauses on either side of a semicolon have the potential to stand alone, such as:"Dounia was simply essential to him; to do without her was unthinkable" (261). We see the semicolon also used by Wilde when he writes: ""Four years Dorian Gray could not free himself from the influence of this book; or perhaps it would be more accurate to say that he never sought to free himself from it" (130).
-Grabowski, H. 7/8
There are very distinct differences between the colon and the semicolon. The colon is used to introduce one or more details that pertain to the preceding statement. It may be used to list items. In order for the colon to be used correctly, the preceding statement must be a complete sentence—not a fragment. If the preceding statement is able to stand by itself before the item(s) after the colon, then the colon is used correctly.
ReplyDeleteExamples:
Incorrect: Dorian rushed to the door to greet his favorite friend, who was: Lord Henry
Correct: Three things ended Dorian Gray’s life: a wish, a painting, and selfish pleasures.
The semicolon, on the other hand, is used to join two complete and closely relate sentences. Both sentences must be able to stand on their own and they should pertain to the same matter or subject. In order for the semicolon to be used correctly, the second part of the sentence must be able to stand on its own.
Examples:
Incorrect: Dunya was beautiful; smiling and singing
Correct: Raskolnikov’s illness caused many realistic dreams; he often dreamed about being framed for murder of the old woman.
Patel 2
These grammatical devices can be difficult to master. I like to think that I haven't been too horribly out of line with them this year, but I could be horribly wrong about that as well.
ReplyDeleteA semi-colon is simple; it can change the structure and maintain continuity without altering the sentence itself. It merely seperates two thoughts that could sat and alone. An example of this would be: “Don’t be overwise; fling yourself straight into life, without deliberation; don’t be afraid - the flood will bear you to the bank and set you safe on your feet again” (Dostoevsky).
A colon, however, is a connection between two thoughts that cannot stand alone. The most common use is to introduce a list, providing more separation than a semi-colon as well. Less continuity, like is seen here, "What came of it was that I tore my caftan in two, shared it with my neighbor, and we were both left half naked, in accordance with the Russian proverb which says: If you chase several hares at once, you won't overtake any one of them. But science says: Love yourself before all, because everything in the world is based on self-interest.” (Dostoevsky).
theshedevil is A. Graf 2*
ReplyDeleteI generally overuse semicolons. Sometimes I use them as something "stronger than a comma, but bit quite as strong as a period." I now acknowledge that this is wrong...
ReplyDeleteA semicolon is used only when there is an independent clause on each side, meaning that basically, if you were to replace it with a period it should still be grammatically correct. These clauses are somehow related to each other and this are separated with a semicolon and not a period. For example: Raskolnikov could not see as the axe swung downward; he could not see the red blood pour from the wound he had inflicted. While both sides of the sentence are independent of each other, they are inherently linked in their content, thus it is correct to connect them with a semicolon.
A colon has one independent clause on one side and a dependent clause on the other. It can be used to introduce information that is to be listed after the colon or to qualify information. For example: Rasumikin loved Avdotya for all of the attractive qualities that she exhibited: bravery, intelligence, and beauty. The colon introduces the list that qualifies what is meant in the independent clause by 'attractive qualities'.
A. Jankovsky 7-8*
Though I know I have learned the differences between the colon and the semi-colon in the past, I still confuse them when trying to write. Since I am not the only one who is plagued by this mix up, the colon and the semi colon can be separated in the minds of students alike by simply stating their functions.
ReplyDeleteThe semi-colon connects two ideas that could be related but necessarily are not. These two sentences can stand on their own, but connecting them varies the writing structure and shows that they are connected. The two sentences should be equal. Ex: "You say that my article isn't definite; I am ready to make it as clear as i can" (Dostoevsky, 247). The to clauses can stand by themselves, but when connected impact the overall message the author is trying to put across for the better. This not only adds a change in the writing style but connects two ideas that had a slight similarity.
The colon is used to pair two ideas that could not stand together on their own, such as fragmented sentences. They should be unequal to the each other and should convey the same idea. Ex: "I think it would be a rather nice excuse: it would have all the surprise of candor" (Wilde, 21). The second clause is extremely vague and without being connected to the first clause, it would not connect to the theme of the previous sentences. it is so vague that if it were to stand alone it would be confusing for the reader to connect and decipher.
Supina, R 2
A colon is used to connect two ideas of equal or unequal weight, so in other words colons separate two ideas, that could also be a main clause and a noun, the two things cannot be sentences on their own. Ex) Dorian Gray is a sexist pig: He's a male.
ReplyDeleteA semi colon is used to join clauses that are equal, that could easily have both parts be sentences on their own. Usually the things that semicolons separate are closely related.
Ex) The Picture of Dorian Gray displays a lot of sexism; the male characters in the novel basically suck.
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ReplyDeletePersonally, I’ve never been big on using colons and semicolons. I always find a way to misuse them, so to save myself some embarrassment I just leave them out. After having read the Grammar Girl article, however, it’s very clear to me how each punctual mark should be utilized. Semicolons are used to separate two closely related clauses that could stand alone. Oftentimes, the semicolon will actually emphasize the relationship between the two statements. A colon, however, is used to introduce something. If I were to tell you I had a spacious fridge, I would then place a colon in my sentence and tell you all the items inside of it.
ReplyDeleteIn “Crime and Punishment,” Dostoyevsky utilizes both of these markings at many times. One example is as follows: “The furniture was in keeping with the room: there were three old chairs rather rickety; a painted table in the corner on which lay a few manuscripts and books; the dust that lay think upon them showed that they had been long untouched” (22). Interestingly enough, Dostoyevsky uses both markings in this quote. The colon, which follows the observation of the furniture not being kept up with, was used to introduce the furniture piece by piece. The semicolon was used to separate one piece of furniture from the next.
This example, also from “Crime and Punishment,” demonstrates another use for semicolons: “All that infamy had obviously only touched her mechanically, not one drop of real depravity had penetrated to her heart; he saw that” (256). In this instance, Dostoyevsky used a semi colon in place of a period. He did this to emphasize the observation Raskolnikov had made, and to do so in one sentence, rather than separating the two completely. In doing so, Dostoyevsky separated the two clauses while still effectively highlighting the relationship between the two.
Finally, in this third example, Dostoyevsky once again utilizes a semicolon; this time to further elaborate on a situation: “They were both still in their fancy dress; one in a turban, the other in the cap with the ostrich feather,” (342). In this quote, Dostoyevsky could have ended his sentence after the first clause, and simply left it at that. However, after he made his first statement, he gave extra information that was not crucial to the original clause, but still was related and represented further elaboration.
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When writing, I tend to stay away from colons because I have never felt comfortable using them/ do not know if I am using them correctly. I use semicolons sparingly for similar reasons. Proper use of a colon entails joining an independent and dependent clause or before introducing someone, something, or an idea. Colons are often used when listing in order to support the dependent clause on the other side of the colon. For example: Basil had one muse that he adored painting: Dorian Gray. Proper use of a semicolon entails joining two independent clauses together. Semicolons can be used where a period would also be appropriate to separate two clauses. They are used to vary sentence structure, and they can be used to join two equal and related thoughts. For example: Raskolnikov’s mother and sister send him money regularly; he needs it, but he is ungrateful.
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Colons and semi-colons are a tricky pair. Just because they are located on the same key on the keyboard does not mean that they can be used interchangeably. The two serve different purposed and it is detrimental that the proper uses are known and applied.
ReplyDeleteSemi-colons are used between two complete thoughts that are related to one another.
Example: Raskolnikov was paranoid; his fever became more severe.
They are also used to separate items in a list when the items already require commas.
Semi-colons are used before a conjunctive adverb (however, therefore…) when it separates two independent clauses.
Example: Basil admired Dorian Gray; therefore, his portrait of him was flawless.
Colons are used to introduce and define. They can be used between a complete thought and an incomplete one. They can also separate two main clauses.
Example: Dostoyevsky used many Russian names in Crime and Punishment: Raskolnikov, Dounia, Pytor, and more.
Example: Dounia showed her concern for Raskolnikov: she continually paced the floor.
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Semicolons are used to separate two complete thoughts that could stand on their own if need be. They are used to add variety to sentence structure or to closely relate two complete ideas.
ReplyDeleteEx. Dorian Gray was the most beautiful man I had ever seen; he had hair of gold and a face so striking he would put Zeus to shame.
Colons are used to introduce something, or to elaborate on something previously stated. The colon can be used to relate two things of either equal or unequal weights.
Ex. Lord Henry believed in many things: existentialism, men’s superiority over women, and how mindless women are the best women.
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