Monday, April 13, 2015

Hamlet Poetry

"The Plays the thing..."
This is one of the greatest plays and we are going to really look at what is going on in this masterpiece. This week, you will write a 16 line poem and it will take one aspect from Hamlet and weave it throughout.

Don't look it up!  Think for yourselves.  When you allow others to interpret text for you, YOU give up on YOURSELF and the ability to think.  YOU are better than that.

An example using another text (Draft):




Candles get snuffed out and the darkness seeps in
to take over.  The wax freezes in its march, marking time
until the heat releases the next forward step.  The smell of extinguished light 
floats upward sticking to the walls, the mirrors, and the ceiling leaving footprints
that grey color over time.  For something gone,
it lingers--a reminder that existence, though brief,
once warmed this spot.  Took up space.  Breathed in and out.  Contributed.

"*1We do not read or write poetry because it's cute.  We read and write poetry

 because we are members of the human race."  We are members who are afraid 
that existence means nothing.  So, we follow the smoke through the air searching
for a voice--
for an identity--
for a place where we fit in.  We fail to see in the darkness...
Looking forward. Putting our sight on the "out there, over there, 
everywhere", gets us nowhere.  We think we are wicked, spiteful,
hidden.  We try on the voices of others to flesh out our own--
gain an audience, silence discontent.  

The spark that lights a candle is friction--ideas pressed

against others.  The light catches, and what once was hidden is illuminated.  
The fire dancing in the wind is not extinguished because what once 
had no shape, no hope, or no vision is found.  
What once was invisible becomes the light.  


*1Borrowed from Dead Poet's Society

47 comments:

  1. Ophelia is my love,
    But I feel lost at sea.
    I do know what is life,
    To be or not to be.

    My father no longer lives,
    But my mother lives with gaiety.
    I cannot trust anyone,
    My heart is filled with enmity.

    My uncle is a king
    Who I can hardly call my kin.
    I wish to escape his treachery,
    But suicide is a sin.

    In a world filled without trust,
    Yet a world filled with spies,
    I see myself in a prison,
    A life I so greatly despise.

    Srivastava R, 2

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  2. Blood is in the eyes of the offended,
    those who mourn and cry of other's disdain.
    There's but one way for hearts to be mended.
    From the revenge they seek, they can't abstain.

    They poison your father and steal your mum.
    Your family's broken with nowhere to turn.
    Eye for an eye is a good rule of thumb.
    Revenge becoming your only concern.

    Trade an eye for an eye, or arm for arm.
    Plan carefully and don't rush to action.
    If you move too quickly, you'll raise alarm.
    A thought alone gives no satisfaction.

    From their lives you may destroy your own,
    be fast with your sword and quick with your wit.
    After killing them all you're left alone.
    But for their death, your own you must commit.

    -Ryan M. 2



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  3. Silence-
    when this mortal coil is bound;
    wrapped tightly like a nematode around the stubby finger of an infant
    as the bouncing baby plays dreams in his crib
    until his soft cheeks redden with tears and mother comes to sooth him.
    Now the boy stands with a knife in his hand branded with impossible responsibility.
    He asks questions of innocence-
    Where is this innocence that’s weaved on a mill of God and morality?
    Was it poured down the ear of a father as he lied in his august bed?
    Does it pour too from our ears,
    in our own beds much less august as we cry like the baby of nightmares-
    nightmares that keep the nematode on the finger
    and not boring each second a line deeper toward the heart
    to guide the poison-soaked tip of one’s own dagger?
    Is it a dream that steals the last breath of a boy
    to beg that his story be told forever until the inevitable day that
    all these rusted coils, in the clutches of that squeaky mattress of infinity,
    again create only silence?

    Jankovsky A. 7-8

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  4. Is blood thicker than water?
    What is vanity to the vain
    I drink in the song of the dead
    With my husbands death a stain

    I pledge my allegiance to thee
    My son’s innocence- stripped
    Which direction do I turn?
    It is a matter I cannot decree

    The power rests with me,
    As I put the cup to my lips
    Do I take the side of my kin
    And commit a wrongful sin

    Poison pours down my throat
    In this I escape my woes
    Is this poetic justice for my transgressions?
    Or is it really just a blessing
    Aguinaga, C 7/8*

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  5. A love so pure but for class abstain,
    a tragedy strikes, and madness gain;
    expect not feeling nor time to weep,
    for sanity one family keeps

    To lose but one and not the other,
    deranged to some, no fit for lovers,
    veins like rivers in which blood flows,
    fall silent in tandem with death's throes

    Seeping madness in vengeful whispers,
    lines blurred between brothers and sisters,
    none to confide in, no words to be said,
    conscience hanging by merely a thread

    In darkness to fall, gone mad in the night,
    a garden of mind, a disease shall blight,
    flowers fall to waters like tar,
    a soul taken to the lands afar.

    Avery, A 2nd.

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  7. People go to cemeteries to see their dead loved ones,
    Pausing next to their stones, cleaning them, talking to them
    And then just walk right over all the rest of the stones
    On the way back to the car.

    See, those caskets under the stones;
    They were once people, too
    With families, jobs, pets,
    Favorite foods, things that made them smile,
    Faults and gods and failures and dreams
    And life.
    And they’re gone, just like the person you came to visit.

    I’m not saying you should stop and chat,
    But a little respect for what’s passed wouldn't hurt.
    And after all, your own relative is
    Decomposing in a coffin
    Just as
    They
    Are.
    You’ll be there, too, someday, so

    Be polite.
    Say “excuse me” when you walk by.
    Tidy up a stone that the grass forgot about.
    Think about how you would want
    YOUR final resting place to be treated.
    And above all, remember those the ground swallowed are
    The reason you’re here.
    Respect.
    Have to practice it to get it.

    Maslach, K 2

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  8. Who possesses the voice discoursing inside my head?
    Mother, can you hear him? I deem him to be dead.

    Mother, where are you going? My grief deeply consumes me,
    I believe the voice is Father’s, his telling’s are abysmal.

    Mother, what have you done? You’ve married the blood of father,
    Though I have never seen a blood so fraudulent as this.

    Mother, why can’t you hear me? I’m screaming oh so loud,
    My worth has been hushed by madness, the truth is coming out.

    Mother, can’t you see through me? There’s more than this façade,
    Your beings are all a game, and I the player of reality.

    Mother, why don’t you love me? You rid of me without a breath,
    How could you betray me? My life will soon be death.

    Mother, why are you thirsty? This is not a good time,
    Mother, what are you doing? You’ve committed the worst of crimes.

    Mother, my lungs are slowing, but I breathe now to say to you,
    You chose true love over power, Mother’s love always pulls through

    Shaniuk, B 7/8

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  9. I am a phantom, I am a ghost unheard,
    I walk down the hall silently without saying a word.

    I tend not to speak, I know how I am perceived,
    However, I come to tell you that I have been deceived.

    Though I am quiet, my words, they do have meaning,
    Listen, my darling, to the words that I am speaking.

    I come to send a message, though my words sound twisted,
    It is how I speak, the way that my tongue has insisted.

    The world looks much different on the other side,
    New faces, new places, I am the other half of the divide.

    When I tell you my story, it might ring a bell,
    But how you will handle it, only time will truly tell.

    It is a tale of my life: both wonder and woe,
    I suggest you act upon it quid pro quo.

    On my face I’ve plastered a stupid toothy grin,
    As you continuously laugh at my expressions, it is my cue to begin.

    -Kett J 2

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  10. I am a reverse gravedigger.
    Instead of burying people, I unearth them –
    Hold up their bones and announce: Here they are!
    Look, they’re not gone! They lived, and it meant something!
    The dirt under my fingernails is testimony
    To how long I’ve been scratching at coffins,
    Trying to extract evidence of life.
    It’s comforting to assign each skeleton an identity.
    This one here: Queen Elizabeth I, my inspiration as a woman.
    And these ashes: Van Gogh, my inspiration as an artist.
    Perhaps someone will dig up my own ribcage one day,
    cradling it like an ancient relic, swearing it once held King’s heart,
    or Gandhi’s.

    And maybe that’s all life is:
    scavenging through graveyards,
    holding each skull up to the light and
    giving it a name.

    Keller N 7/8

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  11. There is demise in family dynasty
    Their minds corrupt and disrupt the mistrusting kingdom
    No families are safe, not even those who pray
    Regardless of to be or not to be, they all have their day.


    Brothers killing brothers, and nephews alike
    Merciless in vengeance, no thought of respite
    Now ghosts wander the kingdom-
    With tragic thoughts, believing it to be their freedom.


    Love is false and simply an act for three
    To keep life one must love with passion and glee yet-
    When the doors close they slice at the curtains-
    How rude of them to destroy what isn’t theirs.


    Death spirals about more than fingers in a cup
    Family reunions result in bodies to clean up
    When the drinks are drunk, and the blood be spilt
    One thinks, oh what a family, one with no guilt
    Turnea, D 2nd Period

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  12. Mad—no
    Just considering the worms,
    Commemorating life by digesting it
    Maybe mad
    but I can’t know for sure,
    Maybe if I believed in God
    No. Heaven’s floors are not marble but linoleum

    Memories have weight, gravity,
    Sometimes pulling persons into themselves,
    Double-layering a being,
    bending space-time
    So do worms absorb the memory-mass of a lifetime?
    The teashop talks from Sundays past,
    Perchance a love affair, or two

    Or do they bore through dirt and corpse the same,
    An entire existence devoted to
    Recycling the was for what is
    And what will be

    Bruggeman J 7/8th

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  13. The Lies and Deceit of Hamlet


    To kill your own brother for his wife

    Or the fact that Hamlet is not going to make her his wife

    In the game of statuses, we must mingle

    For it is better to have an army than to be single


    Although a mystic dream from the past

    Hamlet is not half bad

    It still poses the cruelty, the materialism and waste of the soul

    For in diamonds we trust, we see no person as a whole


    See Hamlet is different than the modern day

    Poisoning someone’s ear is no longer the way

    But the backstabbing, the treachery we find

    Still exists in the portals of online


    So although a play of a distant time

    The horrid, the degradation still exists in our prime

    Although Hamlet is a little harder to understand

    Shakespeare still represents the horror that exists within human hands

    Megan Lear 2nd Period

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  14. The meaning of “blood”
    An idea so often discussed
    As if deception
    Could not permeate
    Something seen sacred
    A silly stupid idea
    The concept of revenge
    There is no getting even
    Even only in death
    When the absence of breath
    Is what we all share
    But as is quite evident
    The only trait blood has
    Is its inability
    To be cleaned up
    Once it is let free

    Crow 7/8

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  15. Dad dad, wherefore art thou thy dad?
    You are making me sad.
    For I wish you were still King,
    All dressed and crowned with bling.

    You come to visit me as a ghost,
    They think I am mad and send me off the England Coast.
    For i just want to avenge your death,
    Thus I shall kill and seize his breath.

    Uncle this is of course,
    For he poisoned you like a horse.
    Through the ear it went like a spout,
    Although they say it was your heart that just gave out.

    This is a lie for you have spoken to me,
    And now they shall see.
    I turn into a man that is mad,
    When it comes to my dad.

    Asturi, V 7/8

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  16. What even is a normal family?
    I know not.
    With a dead father and a mother drifting from man to man,
    I know not.
    With an uncle as a murderer, of my father even,
    I know not.
    My family is not the only family that is struggling,
    That I do know.
    However, are their issues as intense as ours?
    I think not.
    Is there as much grief with them?
    I think not.
    Oh how I wish for my family to be normal
    But in reality,
    Is there ever really a normal family for anybody?
    No, there is not.
    Bunting A 2nd

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  17. Do I cower? Does my lack of vexation
    Defeat me. Ha! I shall be
    Humoured at by thine enemy.
    How I should have torn organs
    And made bloody the halls
    Of this treacherous
    Dastardly villain. What vengeance!
    O, how the son be coerced
    To venge murder; T’is like a shamed
    Harlot to cry revenge. Yet,
    As those convicted experience
    Their treachery, what soul is burnt and
    Guilt is forth shown. What
    Looks of ghostly flesh shall fail
    The devil test. My sure observance
    Shall execute this disturbance

    Palmer 7/8

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  18. Everyone dead.
    Some here. Some there.
    Except one. We reason with ourselves to find the culprit.
    Was it love?
    Deceit?
    Our own blood?

    We look into a mirror.
    We see light in the background.
    Shadow in the foreground.
    We think to ourselves what it all means.

    Can you rely on anyone?
    Does the only hope within come from merely ourselves?
    Society’s face tells us the truth.
    The only reason you remain alive is because of you.

    Your decisions, actions, thoughts, drive your existence.
    In just one moment, though, your existence can be killed.

    Cika, M 2

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  19. Patience is a virtue,
    So is trust within,
    Family ties cut off,
    Through just a touch of sin.

    Kin shall be betrayed,
    By mother who is thy blood,
    To find the man who wrecked it all,
    Is whom she’s dreaming of.

    Words they cut like butter,
    Though swords seem to do too,
    Murdering one another,
    For power through and through.

    Trust no man of relation,
    For death is his creation,
    Creating termination,
    Of one that he so dearly “loves.”

    Mewhinney, M 2

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  20. The same blood flows through us
    But I would hardly call us family
    Your love is made of gold and kingdoms
    Unfit to be a queen; unfit to love me

    To lose the one who mattered
    And now a walking travesty
    The lines are blurred; what is the truth
    Just a madman pretending to be sane

    The facades come down
    The curtains have been opened
    Exposed like a nerve
    And now we wait

    Judgment day is coming
    Truth will out
    Cursed blade shall end me
    Will I be the sinner or the saint?

    Gall, A 2

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  21. Hidden behind every curtain,
    Of physical or mental reality
    Hides a figure shrouded in darkness
    That plays it's part


    Madness seeks them out while I identify them as the enemy
    I seek to destroy them,
    Because of the lies they use to hide right in plain sight
    Because of the lives they plan to ruin

    The farther I dig
    I find that no one is immune from their crushing fate
    That webs expand far beyond what I had thought
    An interwoven web that criss-crosses and divides itself
    Each line out for itself

    To call out any attention belittles my sanity
    Though everyone is aware
    That no matter how someone seems that
    They are planning someone's despair
    And to call it out will bring about demise
    Even my own

    Supina, R 2

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  22. What is madness?
    Am I mad?
    Talking to ghosts?
    Pining after some girl?
    What could it possibly be?
    It is not known
    Yet, they say I am mad,
    Though I do not think I am.
    Others think they know,
    But really they only assume.
    They think I am grieving
    Or I am crazy with love,
    But rather I am angry
    I am seeking my revenge.
    So here is the answer:
    Madness is not me.

    LoDolce, A 7/8

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  24. Use me
    Abuse me
    I'm withered away anyway.
    Falling deeper and deeper as I sink
    I will still keep a happy smile on my face.

    I will still sing on the top of my lungs
    while you speak your harsh words.
    I will still gaze at flowers
    while you lie about my whole world.

    You said you loved me,
    and I felt it true.
    Now as I pretend you're wrong
    I see it through.

    Walking around, feeling no importance
    Maybe I'll go mad, to feel something real.
    As I look down and prepare to jump,
    best believe I don't think of you.

    In my last thoughts
    I see my reflection, as if I'm in two.
    Who are you inside?
    Full enough to float or,
    withered away enough to sink.
    Deeper and deeper I fall,
    and I realize no one will ever, ever answer my call.

    S. Güt 7/8

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  25. Much admired, but always growing alone
    Winding through the gardens, beautiful, but
    Dainty, weak.
    Rosemary, pansies, fennel, columbines,
    Mad, you think me to be
    But you do not understand.
    Rue, daisies, violets
    These soft petals come with a message.
    You don’t understand.
    Meanings as sharp of rose thorns
    Accidental, or intentional.
    My choice was clear,
    To be or not to be,
    Hamlet was unsure,
    I am not.
    Not to be.

    Florek, E. 7/8

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  26. Betrayal.
    Felt in the heart like a gunshot wound,
    Or a knife stabbed in the back.
    Wondering how you truly found yourself in the situation.

    Betrayal.
    Despair felt like no other pain;
    Hurting, crying, wishing for change.
    Contemplating everything, to be or not to be, that is the question.

    Betrayal.
    There is nothing worse than betrayal from thy own.
    Betrayal that lingers in the mind and soul.
    But, how does one avenge betrayal and make a comeback?

    Betrayal.
    Revenge is the only salvation;
    An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, a life for a life.
    Redeem yourself and seek revenge.

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  27. Life is a matter of what ifs
    Are we sure?
    It is a continuous game of deduction,
    Clues are never concrete
    Circumstances are not always absolute
    The scariest part of life’s journey is the unknown.
    What-who-when-where—and why?
    At any moment a ghost could appear
    Changing every belief you’ve ever had
    Creating clouds of uncertainty in your life
    Looming, dark
    Foretelling the struggles of tomorrow,
    The often-ambiguous search for justice
    As if they were from the sun, rays of righteousness
    Pierce clouds of doubt,
    Casting light upon truths unknown.

    Sansone A 2nd

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  28. Am I mad?
    To see the ghost of my murdered kin,
    to weep though your eyes are dry,
    and my grief weighs more than yours
    but you are not mad.
    I am not mad
    I am what I say I am
    And this is not what I am.

    Am I mad?
    To have my love murder my kin,
    to weep through wild eyes,
    and my grief makes me mad.
    But you are not mad
    though you say you are.
    You made this way. You three.
    That is not what I am.

    C Parey 7/8

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  29. Four little birdies
    Full feathered, blue
    Fly uncaringly around the forest
    Free, together, true

    Three little birdies
    Confused with their place
    Learn the truth of the world
    Hell for them to face

    Two little birdies
    Lost in the sky
    Stagger separately in the wind
    Who is next to die?

    One little birdy
    Alone, angry, afraid
    Will he ever fly again?
    Or has his fate been made?

    K Brav 7/8

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  30. My father is my uncle.
    I have a father named Hamlet,
    But I am my uncle’s son.
    My mother is my aunt.

    Marrying for the throne
    Is heavily looked down upon
    Where incest is concerned
    One of the greatest sins to God

    A ghost looking like Hamlet shows up
    Causing greater pain within this house of horrors.
    As he plants the idea to avenge his death
    Within my weeping skull.

    A plot against Claudius is conceived but not
    Without the suffering of others along the way.
    Until alas I have killed my mother, uncle, and I…
    What a pitiful life I have lived.
    - Bolger, J. 2

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  31. An eye for an eye as some would say,
    Has lead me down this blood covered road.
    My uncle, my new father, I must slay.
    For he killed my father, and took over his abode.

    I have no qualms with ending his life,
    He deserves it, that I am sure,
    After all, Uncle killed my father and took his wife.
    And once vengeance sets in the heart there is no cure.

    I will avenge my father; I will take back my mother
    Like a viper I will strike, he shall not escape my wrath.
    Even if one crime shall lead to another,
    I am already walking the vengeful path.

    If I should die in my search for vengeance,
    Dear father, there is no need to fear,
    With my last breathe I shall send uncle to the entrance,
    Once in Hell, dear Uncle, you will remain right here.
    ~C. Lenhoff 2nd

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  32. The Rumors

    Sitting upon the branch of a tree,
    Tragic events have made her lonely,
    People’s voices spinning around her head,
    All saying her loved father is dead.

    But there is a different story from every peasant,
    The rumors and stories are burning rampant,
    Not with grief but with vulgar poison,
    Are the stores their vicious tongues have spun.

    Her reputation has vanished,
    The strength in her has been demolished,
    Placed amongst the other outcasts,
    She sits and reminisces her lost past.

    She hears a splash and glances down,
    Pure water glistens from all around,
    Perhaps the water would be more friendly,
    Than weeping along with a willow tree.

    Patel D 2

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  33. “They Disgust Me”

    I look at how we are treated
    And I wonder, why is it so?
    Then They go and do something stupid
    Like drown themselves and I have my answer.
    They blow something totally out of proportion
    Which leaves the rest of us to deal
    With the sexism and the idea we are weak
    But it is not all of us.
    There are only a few that cannot handle
    The life that They have made for themselves,
    That pine after the one.
    They are surprised when he does not return the emotion
    And then They drown themselves in sheer sadness.
    No, that is not what should happen.
    If They were strong They could move on from this.
    Those who are weak for men disgust me.

    Dame, E 2

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  34. Perhaps the water will greet me
    And congratulate me
    As I am its equal
    For it knows I am just as strong

    Alike it's tides of fury and force
    I acted the same
    Dealing my judgement
    Through the petals of flowers

    Like the water in my lungs
    Nobody suspects me
    Water is so common
    Nobody imagines dying within it

    In the end it is just the river and I
    In all of our glory
    My judgement floats with me
    As we all go down together

    -Javorsky, R 2

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  35. My father is dead,
    But so is his father,
    And his father’s father,
    And his father’s father’s father.

    And one day soon,
    I will be, too.
    Dead, just like my father,
    And my father’s father.

    The ways in which we die
    Will vary one person to the next,
    But we all die eventually,
    We all die in the end.

    It’s the circle of life,
    And there’s no escape.
    It’s better to accept the inevitable doom…
    Or is it?

    -Dushek, K 2˚

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  36. O Brother, my Brother
    How could you have forsaken me so?
    You've taken my life without thinking twice
    And remained hidden when they pronounced me dead.

    All that I had and all that I loved was taken
    In your quest for power.
    My wife's love and loyalty
    And my son's potential to bring about prosperity and peace in Denmark
    Was shattered by your greed.

    Selfishness and ostentatious displays have replaced loyalty and honesty.
    My people have no leader to combat the threat that Denmark faces.
    Norway laughs while you play king,
    Growing stronger each day as you try to switch places.

    Now listen as the King of Denmark speaks.
    Your thirst for power has ravaged my kingdom.
    My family was slaughtered by your ambition.
    But your actions shall not go unnoticed,
    And you shall suffer the consequences of your treacherous deeds.

    Judele C, 2nd

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  37. My brother lays in his earthy bed
    As I safely rest my newly crowned head.
    His wife is now my own
    And Hamlet can remain a mere heir to the throne.

    That spoiled, rotten, deadly brat
    Is up to something sinister, I am sure of that.
    I’ll send him to England and off with his head!
    Just like his father, I want Hamlet dead.

    The letter’s been sent, the poison’s been stirred
    Laertes’ thirst for revenge has been spurred.
    The trap is set, I’ll be safe from Hamlet’s sword
    I’ll avoid death and remain Denmark’s new lord.

    What is this, my queen?
    She takes a sip and from her lips a scream!
    And Laertes falls, away with my plan.
    I have met my match with death, ending my reign as quickly as it began.

    Hornung, A. 7/8

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  38. I wrote mine about the last scene, when all the people die in a short amount of time.

    Swords cross each other like it’s a dance,
    And to think everyone thought it was just because of a romance.
    Being mad was just a ploy
    Or was it?
    His life was turned upside down just by a drop of poison,
    And now he was chosen.
    Chosen to do what his father cannot,
    To take revenge and tie a knot.
    Just like his uncle did with his mother,
    Making it seem like she had no other.
    Now here they are, facing their demons.
    There is no way he could have a better reason.
    To avenge his father, and take back the throne.
    But things go wrong, and the rightful heir is unknown.
    The wine has the power to give the punishment.
    But I guess everyone had the means for a dose.
    A dose of what will make a new.
    But is what also split the family in two.
    So here they are, dancing with swords,
    He is now the only one his father adores.

    Reva 7/8

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  39. they all watch
    and i watch them, watching me
    and i wonder how they are watching but not seeing

    i don't understand how blindness is contagious
    how small talk becomes deep conversation
    and the vague topics are admired for their depth

    why do they not see that i am acting
    how all of this has just happened
    yet it too becomes casual conversation

    a painted mask,
    a stolen identity,
    are both so trivial compared to how i feel

    like novacane,
    my brain cant handle their shallow souls
    and i laugh crazily to hide my uncertainty
    "to be or not to be, that is the question"


    westphal 2nd

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  40. You are the prince
    But you are mad.
    He is the king
    But he is a murderer.

    A tragic flaw in all of them
    Something wrong under the surface.
    Downfall to their fortune
    And an uncomfortable discovery of character.

    Perhaps there is something more,
    Maybe more bad than good.
    Something that tears at the inside
    Waiting to make its exterior appearance.

    Evil is bound to everyone
    Madness hides within.
    Inability to cope,
    Might just cause the soul a sin

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  41. Is death truly an obsession?
    Fueled by mystery and uncertainty.
    It consumes ones thoughts
    Like smoke can fill a room.

    Is suicide really the answer?
    Taking ones life pushed by emotions.
    One struggles with these thoughts
    The thoughts to live through life or suffer.

    Is committing a murder morally right?
    Or does it set off a chain reaction?
    The information is received from a ghost
    One at the helm of the situation.

    Is death found as an act of revenge?
    Or is seen as a punishment from life?
    One must ask himself,
    To be or not to be.

    Wasylko, G 7/8th

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  42. Give me one good reason why I should not kill my uncle.
    …my “father”…ugh it disgusts me.
    My real father should be here, not the scum that stands with his head under the crown.
    He took my father away from me, so let me take the world away from him.

    I have seen Hamlet’s ghost.
    I must avenge his death.
    No one will stop me.
    Death will not stop me.

    But wait, I must halt.
    There he sits – praying.
    No. I cannot let him go to heaven.
    He must pay for what he has done.

    Injustice must be served with equal weight.
    Eye for an eye.
    A stab. A gulp.
    The deed is done.

    Rest in anything but peace.

    Woods 2

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  43. I’m beginning to think I’ve lost my mind
    For the supernatural has presented itself once more.
    Time is what I cannot seem to find,
    As my thoughts spiral through this newfound horror.
    “Come out, come out” I beg and plead
    And swear to myself that I haven’t gone mad.
    A journey will commence, beginning with this seed:
    A figure so faint possesses commentary to add.
    “A ghost, you say?” echoes through my brain,
    And I tell them “To believe it, you must see on your own.”
    As many a man confirm that I’m sane,
    In the depths of this castle, my beliefs are thrown.
    This figure we see resembles a man we once served,
    And the moment that truly made me cringe
    Was when it began to tell stories most absurd,
    And demanded the prince avenge the fallen king.

    Cruse S, 2

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  44. The death of one man can only be cured
    with the death of another, Oh how very pure.
    The darkest desire arises and grows,
    vengeance is strong as a wind's sudden blow.

    A skull in a hand and a thought in the mind,
    a tooth for a tooth and an eye for an eye.
    The sight is tainted with hatred so black,
    there is a fine line between sanity and mad.

    Those closest around fear for their lives,
    for there is no saying in death who goes first.
    Fear rises and spreads like the rash or hive,
    the mystery of death is the queen and it thrives.

    Death doesn't take one, or two or just three,
    but It takes a handful all 'cause of thee.
    To kill and be killed and cause death in a spree,
    the real question is: To be or not to be.

    Galvan E. 2nd

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  45. Revenge

    It's the feeling that creeps in on your mind,
    When something sinister encroaches.
    That feeling of utter blackness,
    seeping from the pores of your skin.

    It's the feeling that brings tears to your eyes,
    As your body drips with rage.
    That feeling of utter betrayal,
    from someone you thought you could trust.

    It's never easy to wield this feeling,
    To channel it into doing what it wants you to do.
    But the feeling never leaves you,
    Filling you with bitterness and hate.

    Inevitably, you will follow through,
    Exacting revenge on the person who wronged you.
    Will it be worth the trouble you'll face?
    Oh, that is for you to decide, my dear.

    - Bahr, S. 7/8*

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  46. The Rumors

    Sitting upon the branch of a tree,
    Tragic events have made her lonely,
    People’s voices spinning around her head,
    All saying her loved father is dead.

    But there is a different story from every peasant,
    The rumors and stories are burning rampant,
    Not with grief but with vulgar poison,
    Are the stores their vicious tongues have spun.

    Her reputation has vanished,
    The strength in her has been demolished,
    Placed amongst the other outcasts,
    She sits and reminisces her lost past.

    She hears a splash and glances down,
    Pure water glistens from all around,
    Perhaps the water would be more friendly,
    Than weeping along with a willow tree.

    Patel D 2

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